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PostSubject: Naruto: World at War Discussion   Sun Dec 29, 2013 9:45 pm

Hey guys. Sign-ups are officially open for my new RP. Here's the form (condensed) for anyone who wants to sign up. I'd recommend using what I posted in the thread as a guideline, especially if you don't know much about Naruto.

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Name:
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Age:
Background:
Nickname/Epithet:
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Chakra Capacity/Control:
Elemental Affinity:
Techniques used:
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You can see my next post for an example of a more descriptive form. You don't have to fill out as much as I did.
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PostSubject: Re: Naruto: World at War Discussion   Sun Dec 29, 2013 10:10 pm

Adding second profile for second character, so Rae doesn't feel left out as the only girl.

Name: Kouken Ooryoushi

Gender: Male

Appearance: Has spiky black hair that falls to the base of his shoulder blades and shrouds his eyes when his headband doesn't keep it back. Wears a black Leaf chunin/jounin vest over a dark grey jumpsuit. Wears black fingerless gloves with metal knuckles for an added punch. Pale skin, and electric blue eyes.

Country: Fire Country / Hidden Leaf Village

Rank: Specialist Jounin

Age: 21

Background: Born to Chunin Satoshi Ooryoshi and his civilian wife, who died in childbirth. Raised with some shinobi training prior to entering the Ninja Academy at age 5. Typically a loner, Kouken has a very close core group of friends, and is extremely loyal to them. Graduated Academy at Age 10, promoted to Chunin at age 16. Moved from team to team after the death of his original squad as a placeholder because of his status as a generalist. Promoted to Specialist Jounin at age 19 on recommendation from Shikaku Nara. Death of father at age 20 in a skirmish with Hidden Mist had prompted a review of his status and possible psychological counseling, but it was ultimately dismissed in light of the need for combat-capable shinobi. Though he shows no signs of resentment or aggression towards Hidden Mist or the Land of Water, his file has been tagged for caution against high-priority missions where contact with Mist-nins is likely.

Nickname/Epithet: Konoha no Hanshou Kanshisha (The Hidden Leaf's Midnight Guardian)

Specialty: Tactics. Kouken is a generalist (he's decent at everything, and neither bad nor great at anything in particular except tactics), but he makes good use of everything at his disposal and is a fantastic strategist. Due to this, he is commonly placed in command of C and B-rank missions, and is usually only sent on A-rank missions in a support/tactical role or as part of a larger detachment than a single squad.

Chakra Capacity/Control: Average Capacity/Average Control.

Elemental Affinity: Earth, Fire.

Techniques used: Ninjutsu: Skilled, prefers elemental ninjutsu dealing with earth and fire to trap and kill his opponents, respectively. Known to combine earth chakra with his taijutsu, making his attacks nearly-impossible to block and also capable of disrupting the opponent's footing or defensive jutsus. Commonly uses techniques like Paralysis jutsu to disrupt opponents movements or keep them off-balance. Possesses an A-rank summoning contract for wolves, from which he can summon trackers or combat-type wolves that go up to the size of a small house. Overall Ninjutsu Rank: B+.

Genjutsu: Skilled, prefers sudden illusions like a bright flash or a loud noise to create momentary openings and reduce the likelihood of the opponent breaking free before he can go to work. Has two signature genjutsu techniques called Illusion: Vertigo Jutsu, and Illusion: Flashbang Jutsu. The former causes vertigo by disrupting the semi-circular ear canals. The second is a powerful blast of sound and a bright flash of light released simultanously, usually by a shout. This stuns the eyes and ears of the opponent, causing a short period of temporary blindness and deafness. Overall Genjutsu Rank: B.

Taijutsu: Skilled, prefers brutal attacks aimed at breaking limbs or hyperextending joints. His style is very simple, but very efficient and focused on beating the opponent as quickly as possible with little regard for anything else. Metal knuckles give him an added edge in close combat. See Ninjutsu for note on earth chakra combination. Overall Taijutsu Rank: B.

Weapons use: Skilled. Prefers explosive tags and kunai, rarely uses senbon. Occasionally uses razor wire or blunted tripwires to tie up or trap opponents, or to facilitate a mid-air dodge. Overall Weapons Rank: B.

Ijutsu/Medical Ninjutsu: Decent. Prefers fighting to healing, but he is capable of healing minor to moderate injuries easily and severe ones with difficulty. Immune to most poisons and capable of flushing most that he is not immune to. He's a combat medic with combat first, his techniques are no subsitute for a hospital. If you're wounded, he can get you back into the fight, but don't expect him to be able to heal long-term damage. Overall Ijutsu Rank: C+.

Other notes: Often makes use of Soldier Pills/Food Pills to the point of it being unhealthy. These pills boost and replenish chakra, but come with the side effect of near total exhaustion after it wears off or the user exhausts their chakra again.

Bingo Book Rank: B-rank loyal ninja.

Kekkei Genkai: None.

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Name: Kaida Shiranui

Gender: Female

Appearance: Has long white hair that falls to the backs of her thighs and frames her face all the way down to her stomach. Wears standard leaf village Jounin attire, with her headband tied around her left bicep. Has red tatoos on her face and arms, the ones on her face are especially distinctive, being a circle on her forehead that tapers into a line down her nose, and two marks under her eyes. Her eyes are strange, being pale grey normally. When her emotions spike, they turn a glowing electric blue color. When she sustains an elevated emotional state, they turn a luminescent gold. She has slightly elongated canine teeth, and her skin is ivory-pale.

Country/Village: Land of Fire / Hidden Leaf

Rank: Jounin

Age: 23

Background: Has a younger brother, Genma, age 12 and currently a genin.
Nickname/Epithet: The Hidden Leaf's White Huntress (Konoha no Shiroi Koryoushi)

Specialty: Medical Ninjutsu / Combat Ninjutsu, side specialization in Taijutsu

Chakra Capacity/Control: Artificially high Capacity, combined with excellent control; known as Chakra Compression. Equivalent to Large Capacity / High Control. This comes with its own drawback, however, as after she finishes using Chakra Compression for an extended length of time, it results in total physical and mental exhaustion, forcing her to rest in a coma-like state to regain her equilibrium. This Chakra Compression also means that her chakra will not work for Genjutsu techniques higher than C-rank, and even those are a stretch for her.

Elemental Affinity: Lightning / Fire / Water

Techniques used:

Ninjutsu: A-Rank, relies mainly on powerful but precise Lightning-style techniques and deadly-fast Fire techniques. Her attacks are tailor-made to kill people as fast as possible. She mainly uses her Water-style techniques in combination with her Medical ninjutsu to deal with poisons, or by subtly watering down her opponent's blood by injecting water through their pores, thus slowly killing them.
Sidenote: Medical Ninjutsu: A+ -Rank.

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PostSubject: Re: Naruto: World at War Discussion   Tue Dec 31, 2013 12:54 am

Name: Zakuro Sakuya
Gender: female
Age: 19
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Everything Else: TBA
Country/Village: Hidden Mist
Rank: Chunin
Background: Grew up in a household whose grand parents used to be in the Civil Mist War. However, the family tension was lost towards the opposing side when another Hidden Mist man brought her father home from nearly dying on a journey. She was 8 at the time. As such Naomi is more like the newer bunch of kids (young adults) who hold much less remorse for each other in the village.
Nickname/Epithet: Morning Raven
Specialty: Stealth. Naomi is capable of sneaking up on almost anyone and infiltrating even heavily guarded fortresses.  

Chakra Capacity/Control: Low Capacity/High Control

Elemental Affinity: Water, Wind (secondary affinity, weaker)

Techniques used: Ninjutsu: Average, uses a mix of offensive and defensive water techniques and support-based wind techniques. Low chakra reserves mean she generally doesn't use these techniques except as a last resort. Often uses the Hidden Mist Jutsu to augment her already considerable stealth and provide battlefield cover for her. Overall Ninjutsu Rank: C

Genjutsu: Skilled, capable of trapping pretty much any Chunin ranked opponent in her illusions. Often uses subtle suggestions to redirect opponents attention in a fight, or make them see things that aren't really there. Also capable of inflicting phantom pain or sensation, and disrupting the body's natural processes through her stronger illusions. Overall Genjutsu Rank: B+

Taijutsu: Below-Average, generally avoids a taijutsu fight because she's small and slight, and she can't sustain prolonged chakra enhancements because of her lower reserves. Mainly relies on her sword or uses her Kekkai Genkai to even the odds of a close-in fight. Taijutsu Rank: D+
Addendum: Kenjutsu- Skilled, wields a wakizashi (traditional japanese short sword) with great acuity. Generally uses it for a finishing blow, or to maintain an edge in close combat. Kenjutsu Rank: B
Overall Close Combat Rank: C-

Weapons: Skilled, prefers senbon and her sword. Often picks people off or wears them down by throwing senbon at vital points or sensitive muscle-groups and nerve clusters. Overall Weapons Rank: B-

Bingo Book Rank: High C-Rank loyal ninja. Status increase to B-rank pending further review.

Kekkei Genkai: Muuton (Fog Release). The user expels a quickly clearing purple fog from their mouth that slows down time to 1/5 its speed inside its boundaries. Naomi can sustain the mist for about five seconds currently.


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PostSubject: Re: Naruto: World at War Discussion   Fri Jan 10, 2014 9:44 am

Alright guys. Since this is going so slow, I thought I'd ask, so maybe we can get this started sometime in the next month ;D

Do you guys think that I made this roleplay too complex or strict? I made it this way, with strict guidelines and the need for approval from the thread owner, because of my previous experiences with Naruto RPs. Generally, loosely controlled RPs degenerated into chaos and godmodding within two months of their creation. Likewise, unapproved profiles and abilities are things that just invited lots of overpowered Mary Sue/Marty Stu-type characters.

If you guys think I need to ease up, how can I do that? What should I do to make this RP more approachable?

...and yes, I realize that part of the problem is that Ness and I are the only two big fans of Naruto on this forum... and I'm a fan of the series the way Vir is a fan of The Legend of Zelda. Possibly even more so. Kind of a critical oversight on my part, but I thought people would be willing to give it a shot.
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PostSubject: Re: Naruto: World at War Discussion   Fri Jan 10, 2014 5:42 pm

Hey hey hey. Easy there buddy. I'm a huge fan of the show as well lol
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PostSubject: Re: Naruto: World at War Discussion   Fri Jan 10, 2014 7:15 pm

Vir Honestus wrote:
Hey hey hey. Easy there buddy. I'm a huge fan of the show as well lol

Okay, apparently three of us are big fans. Though I prefer the Manga because

A.) I can't stand filler episodes.

B.) The japanese voice actors are kind of meh. They're good for the most part, but sometimes they just sound like they're reading off a script. The dubs are okay... once you get past Episode 80 or so of Naruto and then revert back once Shippuden starts.

Eh... any advice on my actual question?
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PostSubject: Re: Naruto: World at War Discussion   Fri Jan 10, 2014 9:07 pm

I'm  not really sure. Its true there should be a limit on power so that God characters dont appear withing two post ready to destroy anyone in their path forcing everyone else to do the same. Limits should be there. The extent though I am unsure of.
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PostSubject: Re: Naruto: World at War Discussion   Fri Jan 10, 2014 9:39 pm

Hey, I'm still interested in joining I just haven't read the introduction thread yet u_u

I think you just need to give a little more time personally. Starting it next month should be enough.

Sometimes Roleplays take time to accumulate people, especially now that there's other roleplays people are in. Some people don't want to spread themselves too thin. I know I'm like that, not wanting to join many at once. That's why it'd be nice to get new members to have more interests.

This post will be edited with my character application added if I decide to join.

Name: Masamune Fireblaize
Gender: Male
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Country/Village: Lightning?
Rank:  Specialist Jounin?
Age: 23
Background: Masamune has always been a bit of rebel growing up. He's always got in trouble since he was a kid, with a clever ways to get out of sticky situations. This doesn't make him bad however; whenever Masamune picks a fight, he always does it for what he believes is the "right cause". He never picked fights with anyone innocent or found was hiding something.
Masamune was taught by his older brother and his father how to fight. He always had a natural talent for it. One day, he decided to become a ninja to further his skill; he wanted to learn what his family couldn't teach him and go out to see the world. He also wanted to be a protector of justice and keep peace in the land.
Nickname/Epithet: Lightning Storm of Justice
Specialty: Lightning
Chakra Capacity/Control: ?????????
Elemental Affinity: Lightning <3
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PostSubject: Re: Naruto: World at War Discussion   Sat Jan 11, 2014 12:49 pm

Okay, so things are fine, apparently. I guess I'm slightly impatient (no smart remarks, Miss Raven), but thanks for the shows of support, guys.

So far, Ness has expressed a desire to join too, so that's one more I can count on. ...sort of.
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PostSubject: Re: Naruto: World at War Discussion   Mon Jan 13, 2014 10:57 pm

Hey, I used to hang with a group of people who where obsessed with show, game and Mangas to the point where they drafted me to play some D&D type game they made for it. I'm kind of interested in joining but I never really caught on with the show to know much and will probably make huge mistakes when attempting to do a character. Since I never really knew much about the series I made a really strange and fun character that I was able to run pretty well and didn't have a huge importance to the game. If you wouldn't mind I could PM you information and thoughts on a character and you could let me know if going the right direction or doing something horrible wrong or banned...

As for your question is the whole creation process too much? I can say when you don't know much about it it's difficult, but theres an exception, if I am confused about something it seems like I can either find it online or ask you (you seem knowledgable enough and happy enough to help). I will say if people are contemplating they may need encouragement. On a positive note, I do love how much you are pushing for a balanced fun game for all, not a "lets see just how superhuman we can all become" type of game. Hopefully this game gets more attention since I see a lot of work put forward and would love to give it a try.
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PostSubject: Re: Naruto: World at War Discussion   Tue Jan 14, 2014 4:45 pm

Okay I'm happy, I finally added a background to my character because I really forgot to for a while.

^No Eon, I will not make a comment of my opinion about your level of patience. Yet.
^^Eon, I love your faith in Ness ^_^

In terms of making the thing more approachable Eon, you're giving plenty of information. That part if find. For those who aren't the three fans... why don't you think of it of you are the director and we are your gorgeous actors? Give us a script lol. Or at least checkpoints to reach.
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PostSubject: Re: Naruto: World at War Discussion   Tue Jan 14, 2014 11:32 pm

Name: Yokoito Kurama

Gender: Male

Appearance: Long black hair, Eyes covered by a sealed blindfold, prefers an traditional black hooded robe as a uniform, his left hand has pointed black colored nails. Unknown eye color due to illusions. Carries a no-dachi concealed within his clock as well as senboon needles

Country: Village hidden in the Mist/ Hidden Mist

Age: 20

Nickname: Ishi (name of his other personality)

Rank: Restricted Chunin

Element: Water

Specialty: Genjutsu/ Exceptional ningu skills Mainly his swords and his needles ;
Having gone sightless nearly his entire life Yokoito is rather adept at using his senses and is completely capable with fighting sightless, this makes him immune to ocular genjutsu and other sight based justsu but rather vulnerable to sounds and other senses. Being of the Kurama clan and having exceptionally strong genjutsu he is rather capable of resisting or breaking genjustsu however he is only able to break one stronger than his natural abilities with his eyes revealed.  


Back Story: Yokoito was originally a child of the Kurama family discarded in an attempt to prevent more children with the gift of their family to be born unto the world. He was found and raised by a passing mist nin on a spy mission were, against orders saved the child. He was raised a mist but problems arouse very quickly when he came of age as anyone he made direct eye contact with was put into an extremely deep genjutsu, including himself should he behold his reflection. He brought it apon himself to forsake his own sight wearing a sealed blindfold almost all his life only removing it when the need was most dire. Unlike others of the Kurama clan Yokoito has accepted his darker personality as a part of him rather than a beast to kill, mastering himself much like rare jinchuriki; he tends to take the split to far as dressing half gothic on his left and normal on his right. His rank is restricted to chunin as the village elders fear if he is left to higher tasks he may give into his demons and destroy all that he loves.

Techniques: Advanced Genjustsu of all kind including the Kurama Kekki genki; His Kekki genki can only be used by removing the sealed blind fold he wears and must make direct eye contact with the victim, it consumes a huge amount so he can only maintain it once he snares someone for two min, he is also able to snare himself should he see his reflection causing his alternate personality to take over until he can break the illusion. He is very skilled in water clones and often uses these in conjunction with his genjustsu to cause his enemies to attack these clones which can be manipulated into minor explosions and  weak water prisons. His ningu is skilled enough to handle some close combat but left unharmed he is practically defenseless.

Weapons: Senbon needles and a No-dochi

Genjustsu-Ranked B+ / Kekki genki Rank S

Taijutsu- Rank D

Ninjutsu- Rank B-

Ningu- Rank B+

Bingo Book: Rank C+? Ninja under suspicion

Other: He carriers around his Mother's mirror which known only to him, to use when his will alone is not strong enough...
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PostSubject: Re: Naruto: World at War Discussion   Thu Jan 16, 2014 12:43 pm

Okay guys, I forgot to do this earlier but...

Raven: Approved. A bit more bio would be nice, but I'm not going to be picky, especially since you don't know the series very well.

Ness: Approved, but a couple edits. First, Epithet/Nickname means the name you're famous for. Like how Minato/4th Hokage is The Yellow Flash, or Kakashi is The Copy Ninja. The nickname isn't just a colloquial nickname that other people call you. If you want to include a nickname in your bio, awesome. But Epithet is for bad@ss monikers that tell everyone else how bad@ss you are.

Secondly, I think Taijutsu rank should really be Rank D-. It's pure unarmed, hand-to-hand combat, and your character sucks at it. Rank E is essentially fresh-out-of-the-Academy average, so I won't make you go all the way down, but your character is pathetic in-close without a weapon. If you want to put in an overall close combat rank of Rank C-something like Raven's, that's fine. But your pure taijutsu is terribad. I won't make you change it if you're dead-set against it or can provide some good reasoning, but it's a suggestion.

Lastly and most importantly... S-rank Kekkei Genkai genjutsu right off the bat? No. I think not. I know Ido is powerful. But it's not Tsukuyomi. A-rank? Maybe even A+ if you lower your Taijutsu rank like I suggested? Sure. But not S. Maybe once this goes on for a while, I'll let you give it S-rank. But starting out, it's too much. Nobody get to go above A-rank for anything this early in the game. And it's only because of your serious weakness in Taijutsu that I'll allow it. Don't forget, A-rank means Jounin-level and essentially impossible to defeat unless you're on the level of a Kage. S-rank is reserved for the elite, which is Kage-level. I /will/ eventually allow you to increase its rank to S if you really want, but you're going to have to work for it, same as anybody else.
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PostSubject: Re: Naruto: World at War Discussion   Sat Jan 18, 2014 12:34 pm

Name: Hisashi Akumu
Gender: Male
Appearance: 6” with moderate physical build. Rough cut midnight blue hair hangs just about eye level in front and to neck in back. Wears heavy threaded dark pants, grey corduroy short-sleeved shirt and heavy black jacket made of some really tough animal hide. His right hand always seems to have blood dried on it especially around fingernails.
Country/Village: Born in Land of Frost / Shimogakure, currently no connections to any land / village.
Rank: Specialist Jounin (Puppetry)
Age: 21
Background: The Akumu family was quite well known for it’s ability at Ninjutsu, and Taijutsu. His parents where high level in the village and usually worked under direct order of the Kage, his sister an extremely talented ninja was a Jounin at the age of 19 making the family proud and even more important to the village.
At a young age Hisashi knew he didn’t have the talents his family shared, making him the outcast... “the broken one” his father called him. Then the day came when Hisashi found his own talent, making a small doll move about and interact with him. His sister walking in on this went to find her parents proclaiming her amazement in what he was doing. His parents where not as thrilled, they broke and burned the doll and beat Hisashi till he blacked out. When he awoke he found a strange book tucked into his hands, carved into the cover of the book was the name Chikamatsu. It taught him the basics of his craft and while hiding from his parents he began to nurture his talent.
Years passed and one day a kindly female ninja was visiting the village and spied on him from afar, watching as he practiced his puppetry. Later she arrived with the Kage to speak to Hisashi’s parents about the rare gift he had and how it thrived with no official training. His parents faked enthusiasm not wishing to upset the Kage. After hearing the proposition for Hisashi to go train at Sunagakure in the Land of Wind. His parents told the Kage and the visitor they would discuss it and reply in the morning. That night Hisashi’s parents argued, and sadly planned to make sure he wouldn’t disgrace the family name by being around come morning. Hisashi chose to run when he heard his parents plan, taking off with nothing and running for hours, eventually collapsing from the bitter cold and exhaustion.
He awoke in a cave to a warm fire and blanket around himself. Sitting on the rock in front of him was a woman, with purple hair and a strange maids outfit. She comforted him with her chilling silence, and before long he realize what he was looking at was not a woman, but a puppet. A puppet that from that time has followed his every step, stayed by his side, protected him, and even guided him on his journey to the Land of Wind to seek help and better control over his talent.
Currently, never feeling at home he travels between lands, trying to learn more of himself and the mysterious puppet who came to him in his darkest moment. He freelances for causes he deems important or ultimately good and teaches children from other villages who show tendencies towards puppet technique.

Nickname/Epithet: Broken One
Specialty: Puppet Technique, Healing, Teaching
Chakra Capacity/Control: Low Capacity / High Control
Elemental Affinity: Earth, Wind
Techniques used:
Ijutsu (medical): Trained and quite capable with Mystical Palm Technique. Other used techniques may be One’s Life Resurrection, and Chakra Scalpel.
*When Daniella was damaged in the past her rare flesh like exterior required patching, and unlike her inner mechanics it required a different kind of procedure. So over time working and fixing Daniella made Hisashi quite deft at both medical and mechanical technique.* Rank B+

Ninjutsu: Bad. Rank D

Genjutsu: Decent. Rank C

Taijutsu: Horrible... moving on. Rank D-

Weapons: Daniella and Scarlet. Various inbuilt techniques and weapons. Very specialized puppets.


Puppet Technique: Skilled / Gifted: Chakra Threads being the standard. Skillful Achievement with a Human Body is used when Hisashi has fear he will not be able to protect his companions, a skill that can only be used with a willing participant and taught to him by Daniella oddly enough. Wooden Puppet Manipulation Technique has currently ever been successful with Daniella, making her able to react without the needs of strings. Rank A

Poison: Hisashi has learned to handle and use most poisons through his training in the Land of Wind but has never enjoyed using them on opponents. The only poisons he uses are ones that cause paralysis and those are imbedded in the inner parts of Scarlet. Rank C+


There you go, long and probably half illegal or wrong, let me know what needs to be redone or worked on.


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PostSubject: Re: Naruto: World at War Discussion   Tue Jan 28, 2014 10:03 pm

Dusk: Approved. Surprisingly, only two real things that should be changed, and one is more of a nitpick than anything.

First, Kekkei Genkai are bloodline techniques. You're born with them, and they generally travel through families. Magnet Release/Jiton is the only real odd one, but it still follows the same basic principle. It's not just a big special technique. If you family didn't have it, you can't have it. Now, if you want to have a special technique in the works, that's perfectly fine. I'm just saying, it doesn't qualify as a Kekkei Genkai.

Second, minor villages like Hidden Frost/Shimogakure don't have a Kage. Only the major villages (Leaf, Sand, Mist, Cloud, and Rock) are allowed to use the Kage name. The minor villages have Head Ninja (Shinobigashira, iirc) or Jounin Commander (Jounin Hanchou) as the person in charge. More a nitpick than anything, and it really doesn't matter, but meh. I'm kind of OCD when it comes to Naruto stuff, so I thought I'd point it out.
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